the game has potential but its not really playble at the moment.
I can see this is a hobbie project and its imperssive what you acomplished but it seems that you really wanted to realese it and forgat to playtest and polish some raff areas.
first of all all the dailog in the game interfiers with the gamplay and obstracting the screen.
A lot of the time there is to much text to want to read all at once and you are putting it in sections that you cant posibly read and play at the same time.
Some stuff like moving and gluiding is self explentory and can be explained with button prompts, players dont like walls of tet after they took two steps.
my final complaint is that some times there are multiple puzzels in a single level and that there arent any checkpoints. last thing fading to black between levels is just really needed.
I hope youll take the criticism to heart and work to improve the expirience.
best of luck with this and fututre games if you message me I'll might give the game another try if you feel it improved since writing this comment.
Thanks for checking out the game and taking the time to write feedback!
I’m aware of all the issues you brought up, especially the walls of text and how they can interfere with gameplay. These problems haven't been ironed out because this game was created in just a couple of weeks as a class project, and the tutorials and dialogue were pretty last-minute additions. But I’m sorry about any negative experience you had and will definitely take your comments to heart and work to create better projects in the future.
At the moment, I don’t really intend to do anything more with this game, and I uploaded it here primarily to just have a portfolio site displaying a lot of the projects I’ve worked on. I’ll let you know if I change my mind in the future and decide to go back and make improvements to the game.
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the game has potential but its not really playble at the moment.
I can see this is a hobbie project and its imperssive what you acomplished but it seems that you really wanted to realese it and forgat to playtest and polish some raff areas.
first of all all the dailog in the game interfiers with the gamplay and obstracting the screen.
A lot of the time there is to much text to want to read all at once and you are putting it in sections that you cant posibly read and play at the same time.
Some stuff like moving and gluiding is self explentory and can be explained with button prompts, players dont like walls of tet after they took two steps.
my final complaint is that some times there are multiple puzzels in a single level and that there arent any checkpoints. last thing fading to black between levels is just really needed.
I hope youll take the criticism to heart and work to improve the expirience.
best of luck with this and fututre games if you message me I'll might give the game another try if you feel it improved since writing this comment.
Thanks for checking out the game and taking the time to write feedback!
I’m aware of all the issues you brought up, especially the walls of text and how they can interfere with gameplay. These problems haven't been ironed out because this game was created in just a couple of weeks as a class project, and the tutorials and dialogue were pretty last-minute additions. But I’m sorry about any negative experience you had and will definitely take your comments to heart and work to create better projects in the future.
At the moment, I don’t really intend to do anything more with this game, and I uploaded it here primarily to just have a portfolio site displaying a lot of the projects I’ve worked on. I’ll let you know if I change my mind in the future and decide to go back and make improvements to the game.
All good, I hope you’ll keep making games